Silly space adventures

"Fine then" she shoots him with her pistol

He takes it and charges her combat knife and rebar in hand

she swings a mighty arc with her sword aimed for his midsection

The white skar takes the gatle blow jus do he could stab his blade and the rebar at the avatar

her armour almost roars at him as it takes the hit as she smacks his face with the pommel of the blade

He remains standing spiting blood at her helmet and trying to grind his blade into her armor

she full on headbutts him

this brings him to a knee and with the rest of his strength he drives te rebar into her knee

she roars in anger before slamming her other knee into his face

OOC. ....dargoth.... watch "Zetsuen no Tempest"...
Ive just spent like 2 minutes staring at the screen with my mouth wide open in shock after the latest plot twist...

Usually, i measure how good things are by how many mistakes i find in them... this one, im currently at 0 negatives...
On the other hand, it has a good story, actual characters instead of simple archetypes, and it keeps me on the edge of my seat all the time...

He was dead befor ethe knee made contact. the panicked guards stsrt shooting in desperation again

she opens fire with her pistol on them

some die most dont botice in their panic

she yells over the gunfire
"ANY MORE ACTUAL WARRIORS HERE OR WAS HE THE ONLY ONE?!"

no responce just more shooting

"NO ONE? BAH!" she thunders towards the guard

He tries to dtab her with his bayonet as hes out of ammo

it glances off her armour.
"Do you hate me?"

He keeps trying to do anything

she grabs him
"DO YOU?!"

Yes

"Good"
She draws her knife and quickly slices his throat

He chokes on his own blood and quickly dies (there are a few guards left but most sre frozen in fear)

she gets to butchering

the civilians are behind a blast door

She reaches it
"Well time fer cleanup"

When she opens it the onky person behind it is a girl no older then 15 clutching a small pistol and a knife (the gun is pointed at the avatar)

"Well hello there"

unlike everyone wlse she delt with today there is no fear in her eyes just anger. she emptys the clip but the bullets are to low caliber to do anything

She pauses
"Are you sure my lord?"

The girl has reloaded and continues her pointless attack

She drops her weapons

The girl had tun out of bullets so shes just gripping
her knife

she takes off her helmet
slowly

The girl makes no sudden moves.

she finishes removing it
revealing her face beneath

The girl is suprised for a second but quickly regains her composure. "your not like the white one."

"I'm not going to hurt you"

thats what they all say

"You just said yourself I'm different"

... that is true...the others are dead

"What did the white one say to you"

Many things

"Like?"

That i am dangerous.

"Why are you?"

The acstanis thrown back and bound to the wall by pieces for scrap
"i can do that" the metal is bent back leting the avatar go "and some other things"

she kneels down
"Well then. Would you like to come with me?"

......(she nods)

she gently offers her hand

the girl takes it